Terrors of the abandoned fortress

Jax reached for the shattered door handle with his coarse hand he heard whistling of wind and rustling of leaves it sent shivers down his spine. He slowly turned the door handle with his shaky hand. CREEAAAK! went the wooden fortress door, I stepped into the shadowy gloom of the castle with cautiousness I heard squeals of terror echo through the vast hallway of the castle.

A glimmer of diamonds struck my eye, I walked away from the door and towards the diamonds, BOOOM the rusting door slammed behind me and shook the castle like a violent, raging earthquake. I hastily turned round and rushed towards the door and I yanked and yanked but it would not open.

By Christopher